Lady Sydney

Thanks to all for your advice and suggestions.... and compliments. ^^ This was by far my most favorite one shot to write, so I'm glad you guys liked it so ...

Thanks for everything you've suggested and commented on, but this story won't continue any further. Sorry. I had this whole thing mapped out in my head, but now I just ...

Oh. Forgot to say thanks here again. hehe So yeah, thanks for your help, crit, comments, and suggestions!! Rather twisted but good and it's nice that you didn't go with ...

Hehe thanks. I had this posted on as well, and they said the same exact thing. (What Eric said, not JC) So glad to know and hear that!! ^^ I've ...

Thanks!! :D Nice to know I got the reactions I wanted from you guys. :wink: The point was to make the mother seem evil to Vyla, but sweet and motherly ...

Mmm... this was good. I wasn't really wowed, though, but that could be because I couldn't visualize anything. Like JFW1415 said, your chapter is mainly just dialogue. Add narration/description/detail.

Welcome to YWS! Glad you're liking it here so far. You may not have heard about it before, but you will soon find out that is a very addictive site. ...

8/10 I have a thing for that time period.

6/10 not sure what it is, but it looks like a portal to me. :wink:

No this didn't bore me, and yes you should continue it. It looks promising! :D I enjoyed it all the way through, and I don't think I found any errors ...

7/10 hehe funny, but I've heard it before.

*blushes* Thank you a bunch, Kel, it means a lot to hear you say that. ^^ Glad you loved it so much! *small bows* Gracias. :smt049 ~Syd

8/10 Pretty. ^^

Pirates, sea, pillaging Pisepi (pih[like 'pit']-se[like 'set']-pee) The pirates only go stop sailing on the sea when they want to go pillaging for Pisepis. (plural form of Pisepi) [pronounced: pih-se-

I met you in chat, but I thought I might as well welcome you too. So...... welcome to YWS, Cody. ^^ I'm Syd, Sydney, Syddles, Snyd, Snood, anything you want... ...